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Monday, May 3, 2010

Spring wind

Disturbs the calm
The wind plays sad tunes
Like an old piano

Flower of a camomile
No matter how hard I blow
Dragonfly flies away

They are always together
Fingers and a thumb
Underneath one moon
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  1. Pan Haiku ReviewMay 4, 2010 at 7:07 AM

    I like the last one in particular. ;-)

    I wonder if you could just amend it a little?

    e.g.

    they're always together
    fingers and a thumb
    under one moon

    all my best,

    Alan
    Area 17
    Bath Japanese Festival
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